Jesus Hernandez Ms. Lehmann English 1-1A 11,October 2018 “Night Calls” Lisa Fugard’s essay, Night Calls,” Her father will always be mad and not notice her since her mother passed away. Her park was going to waste the pond will never be cleaned again. They were getting rid of every animal that attracted people into the park. The father was getting a heron and the heron was giving the dad hope with remodeling the park and making the heron the newest animal in there. They heron was making the dad happier and making his and his daughter relationship better the father will talk to her daughter and was going to his daughter recital. That made his daughter happy and they were talking and they will eat dinner together. One day they heron will always escape and the father will go in the night to go get it. Then one of the days he went to go get it and put it back in its cage. The heron disappeared. That made the father sad.
Jesus Hernandez Ms. Lehmann English 1-1A 19 September 2018 Summary of “Once Upon a Time” Once Upon A Time a short story By Nadine Gordimer warns about the danger of shutting people out. One night the author tells herself a bedtime story. She told herself this story because she felt intenders in her house. In the suburbs people start getting robbed and people harming others. The family started to build barriers around the house to protect themselves. They build everything so they were protected now. They needed to be boxed in the house and they didn’t have any room to do anything outside. They did didn’t have room to play and they cat was not hyper anymore because he couldn’t run around the play. The little kid watched a movie and there was a prince in the movie and the prince was chopping down spikes. One day the kid wanted to be the prince from the movie and climbed up the ladder to the barbwire fence and fell and hurt him self just because he wanted to chopped down spikes like the prince.
Jesus Hernandez Ms. Lehmann English 1-1A 21 September 2018 “Rituals of Memory’s” Author, Kimberly M. Blaeser argues that our relationships to family and community shape who we are. Blaeser gives readers a metaphor comparing those relationships to her friend’s curly tangled hair. She supports her claim with her experience honoring veterans and Native Americans warner with the legionnaires. She gives us information about her dual life as a German Catholic and a Native American. She says our stories and our family shape who we are and defines us as a person. Those are the things that make us who we truly are as a person and that is what should always define us.
Summary Reflection
List one thing you've learned from writing this paper that you can apply to other writing assignments. What will that look like?
Answer I learned to write a good paper with no mistakes with everything perfect
Identify a specific revision you were asked to make and explain why (this can be at any stage of the writing process). How did you revise? What did you learn?
Answer I revisioned Night Calls because I made mistakes and didn't do the stuff I was assigned too.
What are the conventions of a summary and how did you meet those in this assignment?
Answer I met them by making the right and fixing them
Given more time to work on this assignment, how would you improve it?
Answer I would fix all the mistakes that I made and fix it
What is one thing you're proud of in this paper?
Answer Im proud that I learned to right this good paper